Friday, 10 February 2012

Ripples...created and forgotten

I touched the water.
Cold,chilled,distant.
I missed you.
I remembered your cold shrugs.
I remembered your chilled gaze.
I remembered your distant voice.
It's been years,I can't be blamed,right?

I touched the water.
Dancing,smiling,running.
I missed you.
I remembered our happy days.
I remembered your delusional speeches.
I remembered our drunken salsa sessions.
I remembered our 'catch me if you can' games.
It's been years,I can't be blamed,right?

Blame me all you want though.
I give you full right.
Call me ungrateful,
call me a parasite-
thriving on your urge to live,
taking blood away from you in return.
Call me selfish,
call me a witch.
It'll never change the truth.
I was the only messenger life ever sent to you.
Otherwise,you were long forgotten.

P.S.This post is inspired from Fantabulous February-day ten,featured on Kanika's blog Sensitive Chaos.I honestly didn't expect to stick around for this long.It's my fifth post already!Long live Kanika,long live Fantabulous February!Please join us to make it a success.It's never too late.

16 comments:

  1. niceeeee


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  2. I love the last few lines. They are very powerful.

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    1. Thank you so much!Glad you liked them.

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  3. Sorry for the problems in translation. I have the google translator tool, but sometimes the translation fails. I'm sorry. No Possibility of the texts I write in English too, because they are already quite large, and the English translation will be very extensive. I'm sorry, dear. Have a good weekend.

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  4. Beautifully written ,Soumi! Love the smooth flow of words ( and feelings ) in the verses. I could never write so lyrically:)

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    1. Every person has his/her own distinct style.I love yours!While my words can never make one cheerful and happy and feel better about oneself,your writing possesses all these qualities.Good that we're different and still,we love each other.Will never fall short of compliments,right?;-)

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  5. Beautifully written !! Esp the last paragraph:)

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    1. Thank you for your kind words.Following you right away.

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  6. You're quite the writer yourself.
    "It's been years,I can't be blamed,right?"
    -Beautiful line.

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    1. Thank you,Shiromi!But I'd pick your lines over mine any day!:P

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  7. Deep inside a chamber of secrets the real you huddles and crys..........
    Waiting for somebody to get you before you fade and die

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    1. The real me,huh?Have been looking for her since forever...Guess she tricked me again.

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